just a reminder

Hello, Enchanted Team!!! (We should probably think about changing the name of the team to better reflect the project)

you guys are really really really really close... really. You're finally starting to think "cinematically" about the story. It's making a lot more sense. There is something missing, though. and that is a build up in tension and energy. The pacing should build up to a point of frustration for the robot. the moment that he gives up and decides to leave. When you have the moment, is right, it's just that you haven't quite built up to it properly. There needs to be a couple more shots of him turning back and forth and the plants hiding in the moments leading up to his frustration point. Don't move anything else around, squeeze those shots into that area, so that the turns start slowly and then get faster to the point where he gets mad and just leaves.

I really like the simplicity of the robot design. just making it a sphere with a big camera allows you to focus on telling the story and not going crazy with the modeling.

go ahead and start working on the Cameramatic, and incorporate the changes I mentioned above into that.

Thanks for all the hard work! you guys are doing great! Keep it going!

rob